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Jun 3, 2005 0:47:49 GMT -5
Post by margo on Jun 3, 2005 0:47:49 GMT -5
Hey everybody! I am new here ( wonder where I was before tho!) My name is Margo, I'm 15, originally from Russia, apparently study in England. ;D I like metal music( like slipknot, murderdolls, iron maiden, pantera...) and I love Formula1( Kimi Raikkonen rokz!)
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Jun 3, 2005 15:08:05 GMT -5
Post by sillytigerlily on Jun 3, 2005 15:08:05 GMT -5
Hi Margo! Welcome aboard! Huzzah! -sarah
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Jun 4, 2005 1:47:25 GMT -5
Post by MaC2003 on Jun 4, 2005 1:47:25 GMT -5
Hi Margo! *waves*
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Jun 8, 2005 10:06:56 GMT -5
Post by margo on Jun 8, 2005 10:06:56 GMT -5
Just thought you may like it. Wrote it after watching the film.
To The Dying Lieutenant
Here you lie, Son of Honour. The couraged warrior of the truth, Last minutes pass - there's just one more. Soon the sea will take your youth. I'm sitting near you, my heart is torn And tears are flooding my sad white face.. Your eyes are dying - forgetting my warm Relationship, and gazing into space... Death is coming - I hear her breathing - I'm trying harder to hold you back. You're smiling softly, it seems you're willing To cheer me up, lying on cold deck. Your lips get bluish and you're are dying, Leaving me in the lonely night, You leave forever - I won't be crying I know I'll meet you in heaven's light.
So he died, lieutenant and friend, The sea now has him and I do not, The angel of God, killed by man.. But I am still alive and blood is hot, I will take revenge and I will love you, And I'll remember your sweet youth.
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Jun 8, 2005 18:49:42 GMT -5
Post by sillytigerlily on Jun 8, 2005 18:49:42 GMT -5
OMG. I'm speechless...well almost. That is amazing! You absolutely must post that on Fanfiction.net!!! Lovely lovely lovely. -sarah
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Aug 4, 2005 11:55:36 GMT -5
Post by Heather H. on Aug 4, 2005 11:55:36 GMT -5
Hi, Margo! :-)
Welcome to the message board. Your poem is spectac., by the way! I agree with Sarah, you should put it up on fanfiction.net. And if you want, you can submit it for the fan fiction section of Max Benitz Online. That would be a great addition. Thanks for letting us read it here! :-)
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Aug 9, 2005 3:29:57 GMT -5
Post by margo on Aug 9, 2005 3:29:57 GMT -5
Here's one more poem, it is not that good as previous one( in my opinion), but anyway it is quite nice.
The Lesser of Two Evils
The ship was going through storm, The Flag of French was seen. I knew, they went to the Cape Horn, The sea was yet still green… I gave my order: put up sail! And I went straight at ‘em! …the Sea around got black and gray, And saw it all the man… I shouted for the to climb, And put the sails – all – down, The wind will put us on the side, And all of us be drowned.
But suddenly the mizzen fell And took one man away, For me the sea became the Hell, I wished for safer bay!
I saw, now he was swimming straight, I hardly held my tears: I knew I had no time to wait: This is the rule of seas… I gave my orders… Cut all ropes… And leave that guy in sea, And that guy’s friend has lost now hopes, That Nagle looked at me… He looked at me with pain eyes, But he did cut the rope. Then Warley with the wave will rise And then he’ll drown… No hope…
…That day we didn’t get that ship, So Warley wasn’t worth – To die so young and get his sleep So early in the earth.
Sometimes I still jump up at night, Remembering that day, And only when I see the light I know – he’s gone away
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Aug 12, 2005 12:29:36 GMT -5
Post by Heather H. on Aug 12, 2005 12:29:36 GMT -5
That's capital, Margo! I've put this one up on the site as well as the other one. Thanks for submitting!
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Sept 20, 2005 12:43:20 GMT -5
Post by margo on Sept 20, 2005 12:43:20 GMT -5
There's one more little poem I wrote recently... Hopefully you'll like it Every night… Every night you wake up hearing somebody’s scream Every night you wake up, having a horror dream, It is all like that day, when you lost someone, That meant to you much, but he is now gone. You are feeling your fault, scared and lost, And you dream about turning back the time, You imagine you see the sailor’s ghost You imagine you see tears as he cries. You say sorry and wish it was you, not him Cruel memory gives you the sight of fight, And once more you can’t find the strength within To lie down and sleeping spend your night. It was you, who put last stitch through your nose, It was you, who cried, sitting near his face, It was you, who struck the mourning pose, It was all you… But it’s not the case… Though they told you much, to try and forget, And they try to cheer you up with drink, But the memory will never in times let, To throw away to his death your link. …But one day you’ll sit in your armchair, And a window will be opened with the breeze, And he’ll say he loves you and doesn’t care, What you did and what your memory seized.
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Sept 22, 2005 7:22:09 GMT -5
Post by sillytigerlily on Sept 22, 2005 7:22:09 GMT -5
*sniff* Wow. Margo that was lovely! You should send that to Heather to put on MBO. Did you ever start an account at FanFiction.net? You so should! Your poems would get a great reception! Thanks for sharing with us! -sarah
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Oct 4, 2005 0:10:28 GMT -5
Post by MaC2003 on Oct 4, 2005 0:10:28 GMT -5
awesome poems, margo! love them!!!
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Oct 11, 2005 12:34:09 GMT -5
Post by margo on Oct 11, 2005 12:34:09 GMT -5
Hullo people! I have an account on the fanfiction.net, so if you want you can try to find me there. I am Nordensul on there, just for notice.
Also, you can read some of my poems on the live journal. Same name there
Huzzah
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Oct 26, 2005 20:58:40 GMT -5
Post by Heather H. on Oct 26, 2005 20:58:40 GMT -5
Cool, thanks Margo! :-) Gonna go check out your livejournal . . .
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